Essay"Your Appearance, Good or Bad, Can Affect the Size of Your Paycheck"
Central Claim:
"Looking good on the job is an intangible aset that can be important, justas sharp technology skills or the ability to be a team player can give certain workers an edge"(p.255)
My Central Claim:
"Stephanie Armour backs up her arguments with sound reasoning, fact, and stats to prove that discrimination is happening in America's workforce."(p.3-4)
My Conclusion:
"Stephanie Armour successfully exemplifies the discrimination occuring in today's workforce."
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This is a very well written and organized paper. Your opening claims are well written and stated, and you do a good job supporting them for the duration of the paper. I like all the references made from the article and how you tie them back in to your central claim. Maybe some more references to the trace outline could be made. All in all, it is a very well done analysis.
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